Hi! I was wondering if you could check my thesis for my history day project on psychology. Psychology has been puzzling the human mind since the caveman days and was first completely discovered in the late 1800's.
Instead of found out I would substitute that with discovered or solved, but otherwise it looks good. What areas are you planning on covering in your project? --Harley
I think you are on the right track. It would be hard to prove the "caveman days", and has psychology totally been discovered yet? Think about how psychology has changed the way we view one another. For example, 100 years ago we might call students with learning disabilities "lazy or just retarded", but now we can find ways to help them. In fact, I think psychology has helped prove that these might be very bright students that just need to see things from a different angle. Also, think about some of the disorders that we are now able to treat, like depression. If anything, I think psychology has helped humans empathize with one another. -QE
Instead of found out I would substitute that with discovered or solved, but otherwise it looks good. What areas are you planning on covering in your project? --Harley
ReplyDeleteI think you are on the right track. It would be hard to prove the "caveman days", and has psychology totally been discovered yet? Think about how psychology has changed the way we view one another. For example, 100 years ago we might call students with learning disabilities "lazy or just retarded", but now we can find ways to help them. In fact, I think psychology has helped prove that these might be very bright students that just need to see things from a different angle. Also, think about some of the disorders that we are now able to treat, like depression. If anything, I think psychology has helped humans empathize with one another. -QE
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